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Name:H.Ahlf
Age:19
Occupation:Uni.student in English translation
Present Class: Floating in ILI language courses!
Hello Mr.Khaksar...
I know it would be too much of a better humble pie not to be extremely aggresive toward u since the begining of the term...but AS you know,my energy or somehow my recklessness about things going on around me mostly makes me lose some temper,& as a result,it boils down to irreverence.
to tell you the truth,I'm not that type to retreat from my idea in public,so I'd rather have confessed here!but Sir I'm not that rude or compulsively sensitive; what I just wrote is exactly what I've been trying to get u across for a month & a half!!!
And I want you to know that u're my idol in some aspects of language.
I hope u'll find out how worthy you are to me after reading this ESSAY!!
thank u for your dedication, since it's what made you a real character & a role model.
G.Bye
January 31, 2011 3:14 AM
“Why am I ruining myself? Why really?”
It was the first question I asked myself, when I realized that I had been under lots of pressure amid my exams. Pressure resulted from being rigorous and compulsively resolved toward my goals, for each of which I almost had pulled my weight to death. As a result, I became too much of a freak, who couldn’t stand even one’s criticism about his neglecting his studies for final exams. Having studied hard during the semester was the reason for my intolerance & what seduced me into not facing the prospects of my final exams. On account of the fact that I thought I would be the best student in my class, I stopped doing my fair share for a while. However, to be honest, I thought I could even surpass everyone when even not prepared enough. Hence, it caused me to regret not doing my best after the exams came to the end. In the matter of knowledge, I had nothing less, yet it wasn’t the whole thing. In contrast to the classic routine of the end of each semester, though I had my studies going, it was in a halting way! Consequently, I forgot to recite some small but crucial points about my subjects. In view of my implausible result, I blamed it on people to whom I was altruistically gracious about getting across hard-to-understand materials more than necessary, for they had somehow outrun me. But now that everything is finished, I am not really sad at all, since it taught me how to keep my tricks of better taking test secret. And on the top of all that, I was the one whose effort was inadequate for his aims; I had to prevent myself from being needlessly overconfident, and it was truly whatever I was to learn.
Hi, I`m mojtaba shkeri (adv2 )
There are two writing assignments here in two topics 1. pollution 2. the effects of improved technology. They are for advance 2
1. pollution
The worst aspect of modernity ,which is increasingly becoming the most challenging issue these days, is pollution. Everyday when we are walking around and everywhere such as street, subway, highway, even in our so private cozy environment, we can spot ordinary impact of this disgusting matter. Taking a breath instead of being a simple and vitalizing act, has become a strict and dangerous activity. “ What is the solution to pollution ?” this is the most common question today. The best solution to this awful aspect of modernity, as I think , is reducing the modernity by using less fuel and coming back to the nature. By thinking about other viable solutions to decrease the effects of modernity on our lives, we would have the opportunity to open our eyes to a fresh word without pollution and its numerous harms.
2. the effects of improved technology on our life.
Today we are encountering with an improved technology which has many variable impacts on our life. First, we can mention the communication. The technology has widely expanded our communication. It is absolutely common today to have a distinct and simple conversation with someone in the other side of the word, which once nobody could not even think about that.
Secondly, we see the that technology has become the best instrument for learning and teaching. Before now there were lots of limitations in learning processes. For instance when a teacher wanted to speak about geography or animals, he/she only could use some old pictures. But now by using the technology teachers can have the nature in their classes.
Majid Nik
The causes of air pollution in big cities
The causes of air pollution can take many forms and has existed since humans first began to use fire for agriculture, heating, and cooking, but it wasn’t in critical situation. By the Iran’s rapid population expansion in the last 25 years and immigrate to big cities especially in Tehran, however, air pollution became a major problem. Most air pollution comes from one human activity: burning fossil fuels—natural gas, coal, and oil—to power industrial processes and motor vehicles. Since 1365, motor vehicle use rapidly expanded, and emissions of nitrogen oxides, some of the most damaging pollutants in vehicle exhaust, increased. When fuels are incompletely burned, various chemicals called volatile organic chemicals (VOCs) also enter the air. Pollutants also come from other sources. For instance, decomposing garbage in landfills and solid waste disposal sites emits methane gas, and many household products give off VOCs. Some of these pollutants also come from natural sources. For example, forest fires emit particulates and VOCs into the atmosphere.
Majid Nik
The effect of improved technology on your life
Technology, help us to increase our control and understanding of the material environment. Many historians of science argue that technology is not only an essential condition for advancement of industrial civilization but also that the rate of technological change has developed its own momentum in recent centuries. Innovations now seem to appear at a rate that increases without respect to geographical limits or political systems. These innovations tend to transform traditional cultural systems, frequently with unexpected social consequences. Thus technology can be conceived as both a creative and a destructive process. With the development of assembly-lines, mass production of automobiles, household appliances, and the building of ever taller skyscrapers, acceptance of innovations becomes not only a fact of everyday life but also a way of life in itself. Society is being rapidly transformed by increased mobility, rapid communication, and a deluge of available information from mass media. Therefore technology surrounds almost everyone in modern society today. It affects both work and leisure activities.
Hassan Jamnejad
The causes of air pollution in big cities
Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things. There are several reasons for this occurrence. First of all, cars, trucks, airplanes and other combustion engine vehicles cause air pollution. This kind of air pollution contains carbon monoxide, nitrous oxide. This type of air pollution creates smog which causes health problems and holes in the ozone layer. Second Factories, office buildings, homes and power-generating stations burn fossil fuels, which cause air pollution. The burning of oil, liquid and natural gas and coal (fossil fuels) also help to cause smog. This air pollution destroys plants, damages buildings and creates oxidation on iron.
The effects of improved technology on your life
Technology is constantly changing, and it is changing us as well. People are divided in their beliefs about the effects of technology on their life. I think it's good, though many would disagree. Although I think the general effect of technology is good, there are might be dangers. Every new technology makes unwanted side effects. Technology helps scientists make their discoveries then they expand society's knowledge. Because of technology and science fewer people are needed in hard and dangerous jobs. People with disabilities or health problems are now able to live closer to normal lives. For example electronic equipments that monitor body levels are made as a result of technology. Before improving technology people knowledge about the other areas was so limited, hence it allows we have powerful communication tools such as internet, TV and cell phones now.
Topic: The effects of improved technology on our life
Improvement is probably the most common area around which technology has wandered. Technology improvement affects our lives both positively and negatively. Over recent decades, there have been lots of yearnings for easier life resulted from looking back at past useful solutions for difficulties resulted from technology improvements. Hence, whenever an advance comes up, you can make sure it’ll be given a warm welcome by people. They like it, as it can put them at ease. In many cases, it lets them comfortably handle a problem. For example, when you are out of time alongside having to send an urgent letter to your boss, plus not having access to a post office nearby, what gets you to dispose of your stress is to have an e-mail service available in your house. But improved technology has sometimes played a negative role in people’s lives. Parents complain about their children’s being lazy, since they have whatever they want provided in a blink of an eye, while they used to go for it themselves. However, anyone can’t firmly say technology is responsible for this flaw. As a result, whether or not advantages outweigh disadvantages can’t be easily determined.
Hello everyone...Hope u all R alright.
I read all of ur writings.the main concept was almost well held!!!but there are some mistakes which r awful to some extent,including grammatical & semantic ones.
our writings would be much better if we don't forget grammar & semantics-related problems.
thank u all.
G.Bye
I am Ali H P Ebrahimi (Adv 2)
The topic that I want to talk abaut is:
The causes of air pollution in big cities.
Some reasons of air pollution which big cities are polluted because of them are:
First,existence of many motor vehicles such as cars,buses,trucks and so forth.
Cars,many individual in big cities have cars and they are used to getting to their
Destinations by their own,these cars together pollute the air.
Buses,buses and other vehicles which help people to commute cause air pollution
Trucks,variable kinds of trucks such as dump truck,fire truck,garbage truck and so
on which play important rolls in our daily life,are pollution makers too.
Second,defective combustion:vehicle manufacturers that whether are not able or do
Not care about making cars perfectly, take part in polluting the air.
Third,unrefined fuels,that now a days have been used,made lots of pollution.
Forth, smokes of industries, the air is also polluted a lot by smokes of plants which
need to burn fossil fuels to produce variable product.
In conclusion ,air pollution in big cities is caused by burning fossil fuels.
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